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Wednesday, July 7, 2021

The Great Journey Brunner and Kehu

                                             The Great Journey Brunner And Kehu
Kehu and Brunner went on a big journey to reach Milford sound from nelson, They were exploring down a big bush it was creepy and green then they saw a river they made a raft out of logs and harakeke. 

They went down the river but not knowing there was a rip. Brunner got pulled in a rip but luckily he survived. They jumped down two big water fulls and every time they did something scary they had to see who went to do it first. The river was called Buller river.

They had to eat rats too which is gross. Then they saw a beach they could not cross they had to climb a cliff they had to make a ladder out of rocks and vines. It looked really old and sceechey  they did paper sessers rock brunner whent first he climbed up so did kehu after him they got to the top and they were done. know they just need to go home the end 

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1 comment:

  1. SharonSeptember 3, 2021 at 4:22 PM

    Aailyah that sounds like such a great experience. I don't like the idea of rats but I suppose if you are hungry! Remember to read your story to check you have capital letters for names of places and people and use spell check to support your spelling as lots of your words are nearly right!
    Where did you get all your great information from?

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