slowly a blue head started rising out of the splashing waves. I could hear it stomping on all the rocks and shells.Then it roared at me that roar did not sound to scary it sounded sad i found out it was a spotty blue dinosaur when i looked up at the dinosaur i realized how big it was it made me look so tiny. I thought it was very sad I had no idea what to do. I thought of some ideas of what to do but they did not work . then we became friends with it for a we bit then i made it my pet.
Friday, March 6, 2020
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I could see and hear the the dinosaur rising out of the waves. I liked the way you made us feel sorry for the poor dinosaur. Did you read your story to someone to help you with your punctuation? e.g., Then it roared at me. That roar did not sound too scary. It sounded sad. I found out it was a spotty blue dinosaur. When I looked up at the dinosaur I realised how big it was. It made me look so tiny. I would love to read more of your stories.
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